--- web/trunk/www.linuxsampler.org/about.html	2005/05/15 15:31:45	542
+++ web/trunk/www.linuxsampler.org/about.html	2005/05/25 04:39:32	585
@@ -129,12 +129,12 @@
 			<br>
 			LinuxSampler was designed as a sampler backend, decoupled from any user interface. It provides a network interface
 			using an ASCII based protocol called <a href="http://www.linuxsampler.org/api/draft-linuxsampler-protocol.html">LSCP</a>
-			for full control of the sampler like for setup and altering sampler sessions. But don't be afraid, with QSampler we
+			for controlling the sampler and managing sampler sessions. But don't be afraid, with QSampler we
 			already have a convenient GUI frontend (based on the cross-platform GUI library Qt) for LinuxSampler and due to the
 			decoupled design you can even control the sampler with the GUI frontend from another computer, probably even running
-			another OS like Windows or OSX. Beside our own custom network control layer we planned to add existing ones as well
+			another OS like Windows or OS X. Beside our own custom network control layer we planned to add existing ones as well
 			(e.g. <a href="http://www.cnmat.berkeley.edu/OpenSoundControl/">OSC</a>). With the planned SMP and cluster support
-			LinuxSampler might become a standard for high-end studios and concerts.<br>
+			LinuxSampler might become a very interesting tool for high-end studios and concerts in future.<br>
 			<br>
 			It is planned to support all common sampler formats in LinuxSampler, but at the moment we chose to concentrate on the
 			Gigasampler format, because we think it's currently the best sampler format in regards of quality and power, especially